Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Teaser Tuesday (6/22/2010)

So, today I'm doing something different. Instead of posting a teaser of the book I'm reading, I'm posting one from one I'm writing. I started it today. I don't want to say too much about it, but I will tell you that it's based on a dream I had and the song Wonderwall by Oasis, and the title is "Wonderwall". Constructive criticism is always appreciated! Here it is:

"Sam was being a dip. So I died. It's not the end of the world. Well, OK, for me it was, so I should be the one spazzing and crying, not her. Doesn't she know that it doesn't feel good seeing her this upset over me?

Thank God tonight's the night she'd save me."

11 comments:

  1. I love that song "Wonderwall" and great teaser, that sounds really interesting!

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  2. Looking forward to hearing more!! I am a write too. Maybe I will post some of mine too! Thanks for the inspiration!

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  3. LOVE the Wonderwall image. The teaser was great! Looking forward to seeing more from you :)

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  4. Great pick! I love this Wonderwall teaser!

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  5. very interesting. good teaser, it makes me want to read more.

    -sandy

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  6. Oh, this is juicy! I can't wait to hear more!

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  7. Wow. I really like this. Only a few sentences and it's already emotion-filled. Great job!

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  8. Oh, I love that song...and what a wonderful teaser! It has me very curious =)

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  9. Well since I got to read way more than the teaser you left on here, I am DYING to read more. Get busy girl!:)

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  10. you're still writing this....right? you better still be writing this. otherwise i'm going to be veryveryveryveryveryVERY mad at you.

    did you get that im going to be mad at you if you're not still writing this?

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